The Valley

pads out to the top of the valley and watches the cats training. He smiles to himself, wondering what life would be like in a Clan, then he remembered that wouldn't be free to travel around and laid his head down.

The cliff edge crumbles beneath his paws and falls to his death. As he lay their, the very life being sucked out of him, he remembered, his first mate BirdStar, and how he'd never stop loving her, and Feather, where ever she was was safe. His eyes became misty, and his breathing slowed to a stop.


( You know I don't anyones going to care, becuase theirs a big chance they'll be like, oh yeah, theirs a rogue on SunClan territory... oh well O.o
Anyone, GhostTalon is joining the ranks of StarClan now)

(NUUUU!!!! GHOSTYYYYYBUMMMM!!!!!! D; )

( NUUU ! D: D: D: )

SandStorm was padding through the valley, but stopped short in her tracks. The rogue lay lifeless infront of her. Her jaw dropped, and her eyes widened. She'd heard of BirdStar and this rogue. She darted away, rushing towards her leader.

( I'm sorry had to do it, Feather was inactive, and he probably was never going to find another mate or a friend....
I thought it was his time, O.o you guys could have stopped him, he WAS in MC & SC territories, but this was my plan all along X.X )

A single tear had fallen and now glistened in the sun. GhostStrides spirit was now free.

(Make another charcter o.e I DEMAND YE TO MAKE ANOTHER CHARACTER. XD)

(On here? Sure thing! )

ThunderShock padded in confidently, looking around him.